Can someone critique my poem?

That is an extremely good poem. I havnt read many poems but that is one of the best i have read for sure. It is so thought provoking when your talking about the the balance between the good and bad in human nature and how it is like a harmony. I dont know if thats what your trying to get at but thats what i got out of it. The only part i kind of kind of got set off at was when you said "hard white wind" it was kind of lame word choice compared to all the glory and mystique of the rest. That was an amazing poem i hoped i helped a little its hard to critique a poem like that =)